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Distance

What to say about distance
They are always in your mind
Away is close to bosom for instance
Near is all away you may find.

What is more about distance to say
They are all illusive relative lies
Closing your eyes you may see them away
see them so close with open eyes.

Length of the same distance often does change
As changes come there in your age.
You grow and distances away come in your range
Ranges again go away with your passing days.

The distance of one you love seem so very close
Someone else's close to you but seem so apart.
Whom you don’t love you can’t see before the nose
Whom you love do come away from close to your heart.

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  • robena
    August 29
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    well penned poet. i couldnt have said it better


  • paper-rose
    June 28

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    I guess I am too young,
    To understand what was said,
    But this peom is great,
    And will be stuck in my head