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I Wish I could Remove Your Pain

I feel your pain
The pain you feel
Emptiness
A complete lack of all purpose

What to do?
Where to go?
How to move on?
I don't know,,,

I'd like to say "You'll be okay"
That is just a cop-out
The desperation present
Simply shall not pass
It takes time
Courage
Strength
and Humility

I, myself, would remove your pain
To see you hold your own
To see your smile again shine
In acceptance,,, you have grown

You feel alone?
You may be,,,
You miss his touch?
Accept another
Be confident
Have faith
You're amazing
You deserve the very best
Be open in the mean-while
To testing out the rest

What to do?
Where to go?
How to move on?
I still don't know,,,

I can only pray your guidance is near
And when It shows,,,
You'll embrace it,,, My Dear

Author notes

I wish I could remove your pain,,, you derserve soooooooo much more,,,god bless you,,, you know who you are/// this is soooo different than my norm,,, hope it makes it's point

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  • JstaTch
    September 4

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    After all this time how could I have not found and read this one? Regardless of who/whom this was meant, I'm glad to have been pointed in this direction. All the best to you and thanks for the words of encouragement.

  • Destiny Fate
    July 20
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    Words of true caring of someone special. Good job.

  • Michael this is amazing, it is different from your usual, but your heart is so genuine in this piece, it's just beautiful. I know whoever this is for, they will be blessed by your words.
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • Hikari Lady
    June 28
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    You're more than enough, just you being in life removes all pain. You're amazing. I'm sure whoever you wrote this for is feeling so happy, so appreciated, so alive and so positive towards life now he/she knows someone like you care this much.
    You always have the biggest heart.

    Love you
    ~Noor


    • mcope8050
      June 28
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      Thanks for the kind word,,, I am positive that she/he will do great in anything she/he does,,I only wish to remove the pain she/he feels,,, so that she,,,ummmm,,,he can concentrate on something else,,,, thanks for reading

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