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time

brisk hours brush by
while i covet collapse of clock face

every single instance comes up short

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    August 31
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    Time, is never on our side; or so they say.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 3

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    wow. This is amazing. A brilliant poem about time. You're amazing. So short, but so incredibly powerful.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~