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fate's fancy

fate finds the
dedicated ones

who'll give
themselves up
for another's
freedom

believing
heart & mind
in a cause
of masked proportions

how honest
and forward
one's mind must be

to swallow
a promise

like

honey
dropped in a
steaming
coffee cup

a family grows
out of destruction

beautiful in its
simplicity

synchronicity
plays a hand

and joins two
unlikely

to form a union
made from urgency

and fosters
a beautiful meeting
of souls
in the process

how fate meanders
beyond our grasp
of reality

Author notes

Prompt: Iraq War

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  • Asfand
    July 10
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    good work indeed.

  • pocket pixie gold member
    June 28
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    how it works, isn't it?
    one gives for another
    until they realize
    they've nothing left
    and they've left the last bit of themselves
    in the bottom of a glass
    in a tired dishwasher
    and they don't really mind
    if it births a smile
    a heart that feels free

    they never mind
    for that freedom is their own

    xx