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Seasons of mind

Promises not kept, failing repaying debt
commitments not fulfilled and no time left.
I swear, I sweat, I feel so hot
This is the Summer, don't say me, not.

Hide and seek my wishes play
now I'm sad and now I'm gay!
Changing my moods, so high and low
This is the Monsoon I know, I know.

Commitments fulfilled, promises kept
accomplished, satisfied, free from debt.
I'm in peace now, happy and gay
This is the Autumn, need not say.

Death and despair makes my day
hope and trust have lost their way!
Friends are away and fear that reigns
I know, I know, the Winter prevails.

Everything is colorful, every heart is bright
I'm so cheerful, happy and light!
Wishes are fulfilled, dreams come true
This is the Spring, I know, I know.

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  • unraveled
    July 27
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    I like how each stanza represents a different part of the year. It remains optomistic even through the winter section!

    thanks for entering
    -cassidy