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Life on a stick

I hate living on a stick
I always get kicked
Life is real quick
I always get sick
IM always tricked


I hate my hat
I hate cats
I hate bats
I hate brats
I hate to chat
i dont like being fat
I hate rats

these clothes are uncomfortable

I HATE THE COLD

I hate when its hot




I HATE MY LIFE ON A STICK!

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 28
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    Lol yes I like and I think my thoughts would be the same! Thank you for your entry
    gaylene