summer sunshine
surpasses sweetness
soft surprises
Author notes
Six "S"-words here to make a third contest entry!
A contest entry
- Six by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended June 28, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Six words with "S?"
Comments
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Hood-Wink!
Alliteration can be a difficult technique to use in poetry but I think you've done so beautifully here with imagery calmly seeping through to my mind
Congratulations on the HM
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Hoodwinked!!!
A poem of all S's well that is just awesome. I really like this little piece. And the picture is beautiful as well. Just beautiful
Always write from the heart
Never give up
Kate
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"Sweet Summer,
Silly, Sexy,
Super Star "
Just making you smile a little.
My way of saying Thank you, for the visit in my corner.
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soft sounds here, and the expressive words work wonders......PK
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how beautiful... x
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A lovely way to look at summer. Alliteration to the extreme and very well done.
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