I can't stand you fake ass bitches,
I wont take your god damn shit,
I can't be quiet anymore,
I'm done putting up with it!
I don't want to hear about your nails,
don't tell me about your hair,
WOW another boob job,
does it look like I really fucking care?
That's right I didn't stutter,
now take a fuckng walk,
if I wanted to catch stupid Blondie,
I'd listen to you talk!
Your mirror's your best friend,
and your make-ups 4 inches thick,
you spread your legs like butter,
for any walking dick.
Don't come in my direction,
get the fuck away from me,
your a miracle to science bitch,
your a walking STD.
In case you didn't catch that,
I'll throw it one more time,
a smell like that between your legs,
should be considered a crime.
Just for brain damage sake,
I'll say it really slow,
this is the cue I'm giving you,
it's time for you to go.
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'your a walking STD.
In case you didn't catch that,
I'll throw it one more time,
a smell like that between your legs,
should be considered a crime.'
WOW! this is stunning.
This is a gold in my book.
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I'm so glad you liked it and ty for your comment
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Wow this sounds like something I would write! I love it really I hate those bitchs! oh and by the way -Finals-
thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck
-♥Amy♥
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Hahaha, being a non-fake woman, I have to say this is more than true of the fakes out there.
This actually made me LOL.
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i like the fact that you penned some reality behind the rant and used a fair amount of swearing, because it punctuated the feelings better than most so-called rants..l.o.l. good to see u are not really hateful though!
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Good job!!
There are too many fake ass people in the world!! and it's kinda said but I know you should never marry a girl just because she is beautiful one of my favorite saying is, "You can't fix stupid!" lol great write!! -
Ha, this is cute... I dont see it as an angry Let me burn down the gates of heaven kind of rant.
I see it as a thinking woman's view on the ways of the world, the western world that is.
You know of course that to get somewhere (quote unquote) in this world , allot of women are willing to sacrifice everything including thier self worth.
Then there are those that fall victim to the ways of the modern world.
Too much TV can really turn your teen age daughters brain to mush, too much heaven and well she will be a WWJD freak.
For me there has to be a balance, I say we institute nudity from day 1 and then all will be equal and nothing will be false.
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Ouch....hissss....
What you really think....
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lol yes i know
not like me to write such hate, but there are fake people that might need to hear just what we think.
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Being a female myself I had to have a bit of a chuckle.
Otherwise, I think this poem is fantastic. Great rhythm demonstrated within the lines, you paint a picture with your words.
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Not use to writing hate, but I am use to fake people so it flowed out of me pretty easy lol
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