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Wish I Could Go Back

I'm sitting on my porch
not really doing anything at all
i guess you could say im bored
i have a few friends i should call

man i havent heard from them in ages
i guess we've all just drifted apart
sometimes i wish i could go back
wish i could just restart

remember when we were never bored?
the day went by too fast
but i guess those days
have come and passed

outside playing
tag until dark
playing game after game
of hide and go seek in the park

were around 8 back then
thirteen now
i wish we could go back and play
some day, some how

i drift back to reality
look down at my shoe
picking at the sequins
i put on there with glue

i call up my friends
and ask them to play
but of course they say no
they're going to the mall today







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