I want to love you
but I better not touch
I want to hold you
but my reason tells me to stop
I want to kiss you
but I want it too much
I want to have you
but your body hits me like poison
poison running through my veins
you're toxic
toxicity clouding up my mind
how could I love someone so cruel
how could I love venom
why do I love poison?
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This is a great write here. The flow is excellent and the tone of the poem is passion tempered with reality. Though you know what you want you realize it is something you should avoid. Though in the end it seems your passion wins out and you are left questioning. A very deep and thought provoking write here that touches a subject so many can relate to. Nice job here on this one. Keep it up.
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