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Last breath

I stare in the mirror
My heart beats louder
My palms full of sweat
My body cold as ice
Tears fall down
Thud! The knife falls to
The floor blood
Running down my arm
I fall to my knees
And fight to breathe
I take my last breath
And memories flashing through
Like lighting going 100 miles
 

Author notes

This is how sometimes I wish I could do

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 28
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is very sad.

    I hope you remain with us for a while.

    Keep on expressing yourself.

    Mark


  • xX-SecretDreams-xX
    June 27
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    so powerful and plus easy to understand