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sun god

he holds the sunshine in his hands
his sihloutte a black spray against the orange sun
he sits upon a yellow cloud
a  golden nimbus
the sun falls to the earth
he utters a cry
he paws for it
trying to grasp it
at last he grabs it
he holds it high once again

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  • sweet-mystery
    June 28
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    A unique twist on the prompt, reminds me of mythology. Thanks!