kettle boiling
toaster pops
yawning children
complaints nonstop.
reversing car
in the drive
school run morning
comes alive.
In a list
A contest entry
- Sounds of Morning by crivanea.
400 points, ended July 2, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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creativity: 18/20
imagery: 18/20
word choice: 20/20
impact: 34/40
lol! cute! nice rhyme/rhythm/ flow.. ..nice job..perfect w. the tittle -
Yep I remember those days, a life time ago.
Sheila
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A Hoot!!
Your humorous poem makes me wonder:
Life's daily fun with toast and jam,
makes me wonder who I really am...
Yeah, we can become lost in our many identites.
Good work, and 
luck in the contest!!
Peace & hugs, Cyn xx
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ah the wonderful joys of motherhood.. me like
Much Love
Sue
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Ah
sure some beautiful sounds these are; not to forget smell of brew and warmth of toast! I get this 'housy' feeling of togetherness, and a feeling when all comes together. Blessings. Frans
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I remember these sounds, I like them as they are... in the past. LOL
Thanks for the memory maker.
Buddy
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