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All Alone (it's actually a song I wrote.)

It's so quiet I can't stand it
So how can you?
I am freaking out
Why aren't you?
It's too confusing
But you get it
You read me like a book
But I don't understand
You

(Chorus)
I feel all alone
No one understands
Nobody wants to anyway
You hold me
I push you away
You say I know how you feel
But you really don’t
Because I'm all alone
(end of chorus)
The knife
Is calling me
The gun
Is driving me
The grave
Is crying out to me
Should I stay or should I go?

(Chorus)
I feel all alone
No one understands
Nobody wants to anyway
You hold me
I push you away
You say I know how you feel
But you really don’t
Because I'm all alone
(end of chorus)

(bridge)
You did this to me
You were the one
My one true love
Never thought you would
Turn on me like you did
So now it’s
Payback!

(Chorus)
I feel all alone
No one understands
Nobody wants to anyway
You hold me
I push you away
You say I know how you feel
But you really don’t
Because I'm all alone
(end of chorus)

(scream part)
Revenge
Is sweet
Just go
Just go and die


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  • Wow this is a great song. I love it.


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    June 29
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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    These are very good lyrics you have written...the reader can feel the writer's pain and confusion in this! It's been a long time since I wrote a song...
    Welcome to AllPoetry! If you should have any questions, feel free to ask!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 28

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a very powerful set of lyrics you have written them really well and I liked the way that they create their own rhythm in my mind well done!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


    Polly
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