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delicately Quiet

flittering softly, sadly

to the ground

slowly sedately without

a sound,

pure as innocence

delicately neat

veiling over

bleak concrete

streets.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • crivanea silver member
    July 2

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    creativity: 18/20
    imagery: 20/20
    word choice: 20/20
    impact: 34/40

    stunning! love this! everything in this poem fits really well w/t the title...its like a picture that's too beautiful to describe ..so i'm shocked into silence


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 30

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    Absolutely Beautiful!!

    I'm wishing you all the best in the contest!! Peace, love & hugs, xx Cyn


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 27

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    No need to see a picture for this image.
    Well painted words.