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So, let us just leave it at that.



We had so many things going for us
Seemed like we were the perfect pair
Guess there was no way ever of knowing
We’d end up going nowhere

We made our plans when our love was all new
When time together was all there was
When my world was something built around you
I know now it’s over because

We’re suddenly heading different ways
Something is pulling our world apart
You know you’re feeling it too these days
This is the end of the start
Oh, this is the end of the start

We had our time now it’s time to move on
Pay off the band and end the dance
I loved to love you so but our love has gone
Ours is a dieing romance

Still, we can say once we had a good thing
Look back on all we shared with a smile
No can say what the future might bring
We had something fine for a while

Darlin’ I wish I there were words I could find
But now they all would seem so flat
You’ll always stay in my heart and my mind
So let us just leave it at that
Oh, let us just leave it at that.



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Number 16 Leave out all the Rest by Lincoln Park

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  • I like this!
    it has a very lyrical quality about it. would work very well as a song
    i can just hear it....
    Pay off the band and end the dance
    that was my favorite bit. Dripping with imagery.

    Hugs


  • Amera gold member
    June 28

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    This is beautifully penned my friend. The sadness simply oozes out with emotion through your wonderful poetic gift.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Oh how sad But so beautiful. This poem flows with a haunting tone. Beautifully penned, as always.
    Best wishes with this

  • WOW! this was a very powerful piece!! I loved it! Just...AMAZING!! BRAVO!! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!

  • Your song is Your Love is a Lie by Simple Plan.

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