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Paradise

“Paradise is where the heart is,” 

they say!


Paradise is in the mountains, for me!

6000 feet up, 3 acres wide, 

fine single story house, 

gigantic pines, expansive oaks, wildlife.


Great weather, 

seven houses on our street, 

we’re the only full timers, though!

Barkish dog, wonderful wife, 


mountain home and clean, clean air. 

and caring, quiet and peace, 

visiting friends and family . . . 

that’s all I need for my Paradise!

Author notes

Real feelings make up this poem inspired by this contest's graphic and title! I love my Paradise!

A contest entry

Where's your paradise?

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  • abuyi
    July 27
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    paradise is where the heart belongs to stay
    this is a straight simple and heartfelt write.. congrats for the bronze


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 8

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    Sounds like a perfect paradise.
    Love the picture, is it of this paradise you speak of.

    Best wishes in the contest.

    Riftkin