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Dear Stranger

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Dear stranger, the less I know the better,
I've learned that now, so I'm writing you a letter.

I never had this chance before, and though I never will,
I sit and think of you often by my window sill.

I dream of you stranger and how this came to be,
that my father is only just a stranger and does not think of me.

I whispered very often, wishes that never came true,
of a father that was a stranger, a father I never knew.

I would say you died when I was asked, that it was long ago,
of this father I had, but didn't really know.

I would say you loved me and how great you really are,
how sad you had to die when you got hit by a car.

Dear Stranger, I wonder if you wanted me, a little or at all,
even just a tiny bit would make you want to call.

To the stranger that found it easy to throw me away,
I'll keep you in my heart this I promise, forever and a day.

Some times sh!t happens...

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  • Master B
    July 3

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    sad :(

    This guy doesn't deserve the title as father.. He sure doesn't know what he is missing.. He could have a great daughter and person, not to mention beautiful grandkids in his life but he chooses to be a douche bag.. That is sad!!! But thats his loss for sure!! The only other thing I want to point out is that the text in this you can't see on the edge I would recomend a lighter color white or blue or but the black letters is ok except for some of the lines goes into the background.. Great write!!!


  • xXMe17xX
    June 27
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    what a sad little letter..really sad

    • Yes It Very Much Is

      Pain of such things, I had to endure my entire life, but pain caused is a lesson learned, and I truly did just that.