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my sister

my sister has CF
CF is a lung disease that is fatal
you are born with it and there is no cure
a person with CF lives about 35 years, my sister is 16
and the ones who live up to 35 or older are the ones who take good care of themselves
my sister doesnt take good care of herself, she doesnt take her meds or do her treatments regularly
her meds are vitams and weird stuff that i dont know their purpose
her treatment includes her vest and breathing in medicine
the vest is a machine that shakes her so the mucus will fall of her lungs so she can breath better
along with CF she has an enlarged splean, diabetes, and other serius stuff
we all want her to take care of herself but it sucks having to do treatments that take an hour 2-3 times a day and having to take pills twice a day
whenever she eats she has to take enzimes to help her digest her food
doesnt her life suck? so she is crabby alot and who blaims her
i love my sister and i wish years werent numbered!! :'(
im going to miss her SO much!!!! :'(

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  • NarniaKid
    June 28

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    OMG. That is so sad! I am really sorry for you and best wishes are with you. If I were you, I would spend as much time as I can with her. My Nana passed away earlier this year with cancer and it was terrible because there was so much I wanted to show her. And she will never get to really see me grow up in person.
    I really liked your piece of writing! But you might want to start your sentences with capital letters.
    Brilliant job and Well Done!

    -Crystal


  • Beverlynohime
    June 28
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    Oh no! This is so sad...and this is horrific disease. My prayers are with her. Try and make every moment with her last, because well you never know...as you stated Im going to miss her SO much!!!
    Please just keep this in mind.

    P.S.
    Please make background better. It's hard on the eyes! T-T


  • xXMe17xX
    June 27

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    Omgosh yoou poor child. poems like these are real and they are more meaningfull then anything else in the world, i can so sorry and everything else but it wont help. i couldnt imagen losing my sisters.. i would die.PRAYER..God is always there.!!