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Salty Sardines


As the swirl of conversation
flows from a field of constant transformation,
People sow the seeds of habit,
uttering pages of inadequate words as delays seem imminent.

Looking around you can feel the silence as a couple
with blackened looks scowl at one another
and you hear the woman’s silent scream
as she doesn’t want to make a scene.

Your attention then wanders to some teenagers
A boy and girl,
unbending loyalty to each other
as they seem welded together.

Elsewhere
the air is thick with anticipation as little children watch
and
in seconds
a jolt of excitement
sparks within them as mummy says “this is our train”

The guards on the platform
bearing the burden of the delays thwart
a touch of madness, with a war of words
Calmness is restored.

The clickety clack of the train on the tracks
Rivers of people flowing from the train
Waves more entering, squashed
On a hot sweltering day like salty sardines.

 

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  • gaze
    June 27

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    This makes me think of the central station of Antwerp. I like watching the crowd, the different faces and to hear the sound of foreigners languages, all mixed up amidst the noise of trains arriving and leaving.
    Very good poem dear Linda, have missed you


    • sanity
      June 27
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      thank you dear sis... have missed being on here.was here on my own and my thoughts wandered momentarily to the train station...as I use the train every day this is what I came up with. xxxxxxxxxxxxxx