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Summer Boredom

Silver sun, Bitter rain.
Though the earth cries for a drink.
No reason to leave the house.
No reason to stay inside.
Unless
The sun is hot, the earth is dry,
and the computer
has no occupant.

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  • appleey
    June 27

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    thrist of earth could only be understood by a cloud

    nice write


  • Beret55 silver member
    June 27
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    Well said. Its 102 degrees here today. and i'm staying in. No rain in sight. haha


  • mcope8050
    June 27
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    lots said here

    point made and made well,,, and using soooo few words,,, nice job,,, thanks for sharing