When will I see you next, at times I'm so unclear,
will it be at your funeral? For this is what I fear.
When will I hear your voice and what should I say,
I don't dare ask you Daddy, why you went away...
Should I pretend nothing happened, or ask why you don't come around,
or do I wait for that dreadful day they place you in the ground?
What will your tombstone read, what will your family say?
they wont speak about me daddy, or how you went away.
They will speak of things that their daddy would say and do,
they will speak of my daddy, one I never knew.
They will speak of a life you lived, one that made them proud,
a life I couldn't see or have because I wasn't allowed.
They will place you in the ground, and I will surly cry.
I'll finally know my daddy, the day that he will die.
I will walk alone, Ill have no one by my side,
with no one ever knowing, that was my daddy who just died.
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How very sad this is!
Trust me, honey; it is HIS loss that your Dad is absent from your life
(Should I say your "sperm donor" for it takes a SPECIAL man to be called "Daddy")
Thank you for sharing your heart and soul
Blessings,
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Wow this works great with the picture
I really liked the flow of this
Thank you so much for entering my contest,
And Good Luck!
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it seems I have allot of heart break in my life, but out of it all I rise to see that it has truly made me a better person for having seen this much pain... TY so much for having me
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You know I hope one day this dude will wake up and see that is own flesh and blood may need him or vise versa!! You can always use good family in your life I hope you can connect to him or his family some day!! It would be a sad thing if the only time you got to see him was at his funeral... I can relate to not having a father.. My father died when I was at age 3 I know there were times I wish I could of had a father to confide in but I always said and I bet you feel the same way is that if I could only have one parent I got the best one!!! I really really connected to this write!!! Great write!!!
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It is true that the hardest things to do sometimes are forgiving and learning to love.
For not all who we love are deserved of it, in the end it is in gods calling that we learn to accept everyone with all thier defects and try as we may to live a good life.
If we truly hate we lose, it is that plain and simple.
"A person who hates fiercly, in the end will simply hate themselves."
My own personal quote.
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Yes
I will truly forgive in the end as always, but it will always be a continuous pain I struggle with.
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