G: So
B: So
G: It's like...
B: I know!
G: Are you ready?
B: Are you?
G: I asked you first!
B: This anticipation hurts!
G: Should we go for it?
B: We must!
G: I'm excited.. but can we trust
B: The protections fine, lots have done it.
G: Not me... and no-one I know.
B: Not me either, but on we must go.
G: Hold my hand
B: Close your eyes and...
G AND B: ARRRGGGGHHH.
G: Woah sis that was fun!
B: Yeah! Now I've bungee jumped!
Author notes
Written off the cuff so if the rhyme structure fails miserably you'll know why (it is 5:40am). Meant as a innuendo piece, which honestly, is my favourite style of poem (or twists etc).
A contest entry
- Quiescent Badass! by Everlasting Ellen.
1200 points, ended July 23, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely written, and I think everyone who reads it will expect it to go in one direction, I guess we're all pottyminded
Thanks for entering.
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To be fair, it's written with that intent.
Us humans are a weird bunch, we're all predictable, so I can write this knowing that the twist will work because that's what we all think. (If you can decipher that).
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Clever!
That was cleverly written, in script form but still you manage to bring across the air of poetic flow. I love the twist at the ending, all tha time I thought it was a girlfriend/boyfriend situation only to find it was something completely different
Well done!
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