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The Excitment of the Performance

Body twirling,
Head spinning,
Mind concentrating,
Hair hard from spray,
Heart beating fast,
Arms curved,
Toes pointed,
Outfit twinkling,
Lights shinning blindingly,
Music barring,
Audience clapping,
and the excitement of the performance!

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  • Shadow Anonymised gold member
    November 14
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    weekend hugs

    great piece!
    i'm a spoken word poet, so i know what all that is like. the feeling of wanting to run a mile but not wanting to disappoint...

    fantastic piece ^^


  • Little Blue Bird
    November 13
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    Nice

    ballet dance you have going here. Thank you for sharing with the group, Wolf Pride.


  • liduen silver member
    August 15
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    Sweet. I <3 to dance too! Do you do ballet? I do!

    Nice descriptions


  • SmartBrick
    June 28
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    dancing???Ballet????Somethin like dat. Greeeeeaaaaaatttt poem! LUVED IT!

  • ballet! at ur dance recital! LOVE IT!

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