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Rose petals- A timeless moment.


Its spring again, and the roses begin to blossom their rich colours.
wisteria twists around the garden gate encapsulating  the rough old wood. as graceful butterflies make their presence known.

there, framed by the timeless archway, a frail woman, years have passed across her once beautiful face, only her eyes betray the hidden youth.
every morning she stands there drawn by the scent of sweet roses , looking out over the cemented changing landscape.
across in reply to her silent longing stands an equally frail old man. time had been cruel, creases fold around his sad eyes.
in unison they look, and watch, eyes catch and hold for a brief moment, then fall away. memories of years beat between them, timeless and lasting as children play upon the brick pavement.


they have known each-other, and have lost. they have cried and danced the same path that brought them here. families have came and gone, with the changing seasons. but still within their eyes shines their love. unchanged and as chaotic as their raging seas. with or without, near or far.they haunt each-others thoughts. fingers outstretched, they brush the air. always almost touching.

under the scents of falling rose petals, they are always almost touching.

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  • Nymphetemine
    August 1

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    I really did love this write.. There is so much emotion with this write.. Love can last a lifetime, with its ups and downs. And sometimes there are people who stay together a lifetime..

    but still within their eyes shines their love. unchanged and as chaotic as their raging seas. with or without, near or far.they haunt each-others thoughts. fingers outstretched, they brush the air. always almost touching.

    This is a faultless verse.. Beautifull, rich in description..

  • evelynxxoo
    July 3
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    sometimes we search and search and the things we most want are at are finger tips but almost out of reach reminding us if we truely want it bad enough we will find away to grab it with both hands and run something worth having is worth the gamble we all k


  • Sortingthroughlife
    June 27
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    Wow.... Really awesome job.

    I loved the way you describe it.


  • NyteShade
    June 27

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    I loved the imagery i got with this piece, its very beautifully written, Lovely descriptions also. well done