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This time

Such a deadly life you live, Clubbing, guy's, and Ecstasy.
Is that the way you want your life to be?
Driving drunk, I see you swerve around,

someday you'll crash.
One day you're world will crumble down.

 

Oh no, your blacked out again,
You don't remember a thing.
How many guys did you fuck this time ?
Seems you'll do anything just to get high,

Dancing like sluts, in the middle of the parking lot.
Getting so fucking annoyed, swear I'm gonna snap.
I just want to fuck you up, teach you a lesson, that you need to be taught.
Why don't you just die, lay down forever, pretend it's a nap.

Oh no, your blacked out again,
You don't remember a thing.
How many guys did you fuck this time ?
Seems you'll do anything just to get high,

Someday you will get what you deserve.

And it won't be good, that's for sure.

Maybe it will be fatal, the next time you swerve.

I wont lie, that's what I want, enough is enough.

When I look at you, my thoughts turn violent, I feel a hatred so pure,

cause that's exactly what you deserve.

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The style I sing this is like punk rock

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  • You mixed up your and you're in several spots.

    Other than that, you send a strong message to society.

  • whoa.. lyrics>?!?!? sweet.

    I wanna kill stupid skanks too... its okay
    v.v

  • Awesome lyrics...

    And so true the world over...
    Sadly it is a regular & tragically accepted sight to see where I live... Alcohol fuelled, attention seeking whores collapsing in the street, throwing up in their laps & still ready fuck anyone with narcotics to spare...
    Strong narrative & depth of feeling that makes for a compelling write & indeed song...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • CharleeBoy
    June 28

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    It's nice to see lyrics up on this site. I also create my own music, so I know how rewarding this piece must feel. Good job, and keep it up.

    I'll be sure to check out more of your work soon.

  • Rawr! yes you were mad/pissed. well done!


    • Ami
      October 25
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      fuck yeah I hate bitchs like that

  • this is a very smart poem that is admirable and very well written! it is a pure pleasure to read and i imagine you felt good writing this because it shows in the feeling of this poem.

  • WOW! This is a very nice poem. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.


  • Miss Macabre
    June 27

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    Makes me feel bad for getting drunk last night. Lol.

    Good lyrics though, sometimes I want to fuck up stupid people too.

    • Ami
      June 27
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      Don't feel bad I drink too I go crazy on vodka a lot but This is for the girls that try to sleep with every guy no matter what age or how bad they look or if they have a gf that's what this is for
      and those two girls last night happened to be wasted and fucked up on Ecstasy IDK drunks are awesome it's only the sluts I hate >.


  • songstress80
    June 27

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    again, i'm the first to comment on one of your works...yeah me!
    in the last paragraph i think you meant "that's what 'I' want" (you forgot the 'I') and misspelled 'hatred' (you have it 'hatrid'). anyways no big cos sometimes i have some misspelled words and someone catches it for me
    anyway it's another excellent write as usual! you'll never disappoint me! i like how you allowed a rant to become a wonderfully powerful poem! excellent job!


  • mcope8050
    June 27

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    sooo emotional

    you put that together pretty quick,,, motivated,,, are you?,,, the emotions and almost a rage are felt here in this one,,,, always looking forward to reading your next write,,,michael

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