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on the dresser;
                          one glove-

beneath the bed,               
idle on the floor…

his sparkled socks,
and patent leather shoes

no longer will they dance,
on this...  earthen moon


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A man and his music,
remembered...

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  • Simple, but beautifully effective.
    Well done, thank you for your contribution.


  • crivanea silver member
    July 2

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    sigh,...i can never get tire of reading your poems...u def. have a way with words..not a word wasted..not a line overdone..each breath is taken n the reader breath it in ..again..n ..again...lovely!

  • nice

  • Such a lovely tribute
    God bless you Mal...


  • This says Micheal. You've captured him in these few lines. The world has not lost him for he will live as long as the music plays in our heads and the dance moves flash through our minds.


  • suseann
    June 27

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    This world will forget with time the beautiful soul who's shoes had no equal.But he's etched eternal in history's register.This piece dives deeply into the essence eternal his spirit imprinted on us all.

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