on the dresser;
one glove-
beneath the bed,
idle on the floor…
his sparkled socks,
and patent leather shoes
no longer will they dance,
on this... earthen moon
Author notes
A man and his music,
remembered...
In a list
A contest entry
- In Memory of Michael Jackson... by Raven Tears.
1050 points, ended August 6, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simple, but beautifully effective.
Well done, thank you for your contribution.

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sigh,...i can never get tire of reading your poems...u def. have a way with words..not a word wasted..not a line overdone..each breath is taken n the reader breath it in ..again..n ..again...lovely!


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nice
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Such a lovely tribute
God bless you Mal...




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This says Micheal. You've captured him in these few lines. The world has not lost him for he will live as long as the music plays in our heads and the dance moves flash through our minds.
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This world will forget with time the beautiful soul who's shoes had no equal.But he's etched eternal in history's register.This piece dives deeply into the essence eternal his spirit imprinted on us all.


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