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Requiem for Jacko

Poor old Jacko, he is no more
I wonder did the helpful paramedics
Try to resuscitate the king of pop by singing
"gotta be starting something,
gotta be starting something"?
Or maybe he tripped over a perambulator
And the grief-struck world could blame it on the buggy.

But we who are left behind,
We will never get over his demise.
For it's not as easy as A-B-C
O it's such a thriller-killer!
And to think his tour dates have been cancelled:
(they were Thomas (aged 9) Billy, aged 7
(and don't forget little Mark, aged 6).

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  • Catrina Heart
    July 19
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    lovely written poem with a humour touch!


  • Barry Hodges silver member
    July 14

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    I loved this and would like to write a poem just for you, Mr B. Where do you live? I think one of my nieces croaked there. Jolly nice poem by the way. Mr B.


  • audaciousange
    July 13

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    Cheeky! Love it!

    Top of the Morning to you Mr Buttock,
    LMAO....I've been waiting for the Wacko Jacko jokes to erupt...which is normal protocol when a celebrity croaks etc. But it's highly possible also, Micheal.J jokes have been long exhausted since his day in court...OMG!..( Isn't that putting it lightly?) haha!
    Seriously now, Like his music or not, one would have to be rather narrow minded to not see that...
    He was one distinctively unique freak of nature!

    Feedom of speech, good on you!
    xXx


  • wickedthoughts
    July 10

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    I have to agree with tibsy. Now we will never know the truth of those allegations, but by god, the guy could entertain!


  • tibsy25
    July 8

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    Tasteless

    Although I can see the humopur in this piece my own opinion is that it is tasteless, I feel that he should be allowed to rest in peace and if the rumours were true then he is surely with his maker and he alone will judge him.

    as it is said so shal it be
    Let him without sin cast the first stone,

    And you my dear friend i would imagine like the rest of us are far from sin free,

    but good flow and imagination used here.

    T


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    July 7

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    Overall, a wonderful reflection of this mighty record breaker!Catchy , with the lyric-conscience.

    Your poem brought us some very crucial points. Thank you! Warmly, CookieZeal


  • Ann45 gold member
    July 7

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    WELL YOU CERTAINLY WILL HAVE THOSE THAT WILL LIKE AND THOSE THAT WILL HATE THIS, BUT EACH TO THEIR OWN I SAY.


  • Zia-
    July 7
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    LOL

    lol this poem was so funny.... great write hey lol


  • Andi. gold member
    July 5
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    I happen to like Michael Jackson, and those molestation charges were pathetic little boys trying to squeeze money from Michael because they felt they could.
    This poem is disgusting, and you, "Mr Buttock" should be shot for coming up with it.
    Shame on you


  • euphoric-frenzy
    July 1
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    Lol.


  • kathrynguyrocks
    June 30
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    pahahhaaa
    mr buttock i just laughed my fuckin buttock off

    bravo!


  • chills gold member
    June 30

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    Well, cruel and perfectly formed!! Last three lines made me laugh out loud but BUT - oh my what an unhappy person he was. You have to have a tiny splatter of sympathy....

  • groovy afternoon
    June 30
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    I hate this piece and I cannot even hide it.


  • England Awaken
    June 30

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    Yet another case of how the world can become polluted by deviants and other untermenschen! I laughed till I farted.


  • appleey
    June 28
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    hmm... i like it ... being a MJ fan

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