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1776

Our countries declaration

celebatorie from a yoke of

 

tyranny an legions spoke thereof

pledged where men of light pen

signed an honor of liberties again

 

given to a country who fought

to keep liberities free taught.

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Prompt: 1776

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  • Antipodi
    June 27

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    so many great intentions should be celebrated and your poem reflect that ...sadly things ain't goin to well at present and freedoms are being curtailed in the name of suspicion and innuendo...


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 27
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    yay


  • Cyanide Dreams
    June 27

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    nicely done. I liked your take on the prompt. Imagery was great. Great job and good luck in the contest.

    josh

    • saddie23
      June 27
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      Thanks

      I thought this was fitting for the contest on the basis of our celebarations on the 4th of July.

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