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We became free
We became our own
Sat foot upon this land
and called it home

Seventeen-hundred
seventy six it be
The sacred year
we became free...

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A little history for you ...Happy 4th!!

A contest entry

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  • Stuart Higginson gold member
    November 1

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    I like that it is concise, and delivers its message immediately, in a way that reminds people of what is important foremost ... the freedom of the people(s) of (and) their land.


  • Sarin Rayne
    July 9

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    Short and to the point.I loved it.This poem should remind us of what our forfathers did for us to give us this freedom.Thank you for sharing.


  • myrataal silver member
    June 27
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    A positive take ...

    on this prompt.


  • Cyanide Dreams
    June 27

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    Very simple take on the prompt. Your emotions were good in this and I liked the rhyme. Great job and good luck in the contest.

    Josh


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    June 27

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    A great write, my friend! (I'm from New Zealand, and even I know what happened in 1776 )
    Best of luck in the contest!

    ♥ Maria ♥

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