In soft evening breeze,
your breath through the tree's,
I feel, your eyes are seen.
From love's distant shores and miles between,
I refuse surrender to times extremes,
still sacred is our boxed heart dreams,
fore within God's hands is eternity
always and forever our bonded soul's distiny.
Author notes
Prompt: Defiance, 50 words or less.
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
1000 points, ended June 28, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hey Dave
"Boxed heart dreams" is very poignant. Can't wait till nextValentine's Day!
Good going here , Dave.
Good luck in the contest.
John
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Beautifully penned with that wonderful spiritual undertone. Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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very nicely done and done with a flavor of meter and rhyme
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Thank you
for your kind remarks, been awhile since I have been online , it is nice to dip the quill again.
How have you been , well I hope?
Thanks again.
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very nicely done and done with a flavor of meter and rhyme
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Cheering You On!
Good take on the prompt..Your determined resolve to love no matter the distance and circumstances is awesomely penned in flow and rhyme...Wonderful to see your soul once again put to paper, brother..."still sacred is our boxed heart dreams fore within God's hands is eternity always and forever our bonded soul's destiny"
May your prayers be answered....and all the best in the contest! sis
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VEry Nice!!!!
Nice to see you writing again David...I liked this it was as gentle as a summer breeze..rhymes were perfect and you took the reader just where you wanted them to go on this romantic journey with you...too bad there is so much distance between the two loves in this poem though....still I believe in the end they will find their way to one another...Great job on this one! Thanks for sharing!!!~~~Toni~~~
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