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the Beauty of a Rose

We are like the rose,
Or what ever flower we chose.
God made us perfect in,
His image with his hands
He so adores us still.

When He look down at us
This is how we appear.
Like we are spot-lighted.
Behind us is not clear.
We are what is important.

We- not our clothes.
Not how we are made up
It is what is inside of us.
Not your bone struture.
Our heart is His stuff.

A heart with kindness
A heart with Joy.
A heart with love.
A heart with others first.
A heart that is attenative to Him.

 

The perfect rose or flower- many. The perfect Heart-1

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 2

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    I like the heart felt feel to this poem.
    It is very sincere, Well done here and thank you for entering my contest.

    Also your patience. So sorry about the delay in judging.



    Love,
    Delila


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 30

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    BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    God morning mac, This one is so heartfelt and a delight to read. Brings a smile to this reader. You take care,

    Blessings, Sandy


  • BluRosePoet8488
    June 27
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    AMEN! Well done, my friend. You are so right with your words. Yes, God looks within each of us and not without. He looks at what is deep inside because that is where our spirit and soul lie. WOnderfully written with beautiful thoughts. Keep the ink flowing.
    ~Donna~


  • Antipodi
    June 27

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    So wonderfully true dear poet , wish more would understand these words , what an incredible love he offers and all have to do is accept him...