Ralpf and Rann were Nomes
Fighters for the rights of those in need.
When went to battle , always sis they win.
They were cousins, real close kin.
One day at battle they spied a strange bug.
A new strange beetle, new line.
He had a diamon on his back.
This would make a great sheild.
How the fought, to the end for real.
The sad art of it was it was soft shell.
When the battle was over,
With a broken shell the bug crawled away.
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- The Spot by azure85.
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Wow, you made a very creative story out of the spot! And it was a great surprise ending too. I really am enjoying everyone's interpretation, yours is great! Thank you so much.
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