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Our Great Indian people

Our Great Indian People have shown their great might
In millions of ballots they have written their will of right.

They have sent the message to the politicians smart
that people have much wide vision that can keep apart

pseudo king makers from the power and they know how to bring
an idol of aspirations into the power, a real would be the King.

Our Great Indian people have spread the message clear
politicians should be service minded not a dirty player

Our Great Indian people have again shown their great strength
which a math politician will fail to measure by any unit of length

The flag of democracy is uphold all above here in our land
How glorifying and proudly unfurled! Come on see my friend.

[ this poem is my tribute to the people of India giving mandate
for a stable Govt. in the country in 2009 parliamentary election]

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  • ZeInkslinger
    July 12

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    great way of expressing yer patriotism of India.
    Democracy, even though is has some flaws, is the best known government to actually work on and off paper.
    God Bless,
    ZeInkslinger