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Sharing Life(H.M.)

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Life sparks from the soul
diffusing gifts
of halcyon profusion.

The inner glow
twists and twirls;
a dancing miracle,
exploding towards love.

Emotions grow feathers
and fly to distant galaxial hearts,
planting feathered petals
of future promise.

And creation infuses the warmth,
as a suncatcher soaks and reflects.





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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 2

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    Such lovely thoughts woven in your words here.
    I read it over a few times and discovered that I liked better each time.

    adored the 2nd and 3rd stanza... you really did a great job with this picture for inspiration. Well done

    thank you for entering my contest and for you patience.


    Delila


  • penman gold member
    June 27

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    Excellent

    Such an amazing write. So very creative as always and terrific take on the picture. Best of luck in the contest.

  • a dancing miracle - and the hope that slips in between fingerprints' swirls gather the inner illuminations, like lights in the night, the future presses to lips, and hearts explode into wondrous lines, stories, that last a lifetime in defence, defiance, as a wild spirit strips solitide of its meaning, its reason to be alive and sighs place love at feet, to be kissed by gentle minds. a good poem.