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I've crossed path's
with your leaving shadow
And it's drawn out
the sunrise from dark places
for just a few moments

I can feel your presence
it sorrounds me with memories
of all the sweet things
you would do for me

I learned so much
from watching you walk out

I found out what makes
a real womans' heart flutter
I will never tell

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  • Emmyb gold member
    October 14

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    this is such a beautiful piece. When I first clicked on it, for some reason the background was black ( I think until my slow computer managed to load this background) and I actually preferred reading it on a black background because the poem stands alone with such strength that it doesnt need all this colour behind it.

    well done on such a captivating write

    Emma