This time
as before
I did not
want to make
a mistake.
Mistake of
not saying
those three words
I thought you
surely longed
to hear
from me.
I thought
I shouldn’t
surely make
a mistake.
This time
instead
I said
in haste
those three words
and I
came to know
I made
a mistake.
Author notes
6) "Loving you was my favorite mistake I ever made, even if it destroyed me." -unknown
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Nicely done with this piece.
Good imagery and flow here.
Bravo
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WOW! This was really really really good!
I loved it! Just..WOW! amazing job! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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