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They Are But Thorns.

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Quiescence through malignance
maelstrom delayed
singular translation
insanity betrayed.

Well beloved oasis rose
naked, unpossessed
realities conclusion
moments sanely blessed.

All the world around me
frenzies through my mind
yet they are but thorns
loathingly entwined.

Do you deny my reason
for I am petal bound
depth of my awareness
beyond you, spins profound.

 

 

 

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 2

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    oh my goodness... i love the flow of this and the word choices are excellent.
    I love words and you have used a few of my favs here.

    Also your piece is deep but I am not drowning. your ending is a very elegant and brilliant. Well done.

    Thank you for your entry and patience in my contest.



    Love,
    Delila


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 27

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    Love your ending in this Beautiful write on the prompt.
    Best wishes with this