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the lonely girl

she lost and lonely
She's not bitter
mean or cold.
She's just your average teenage girl
if she must
she hides away.
lonely days just waste away.
I've never seen the poor girl smile..
oh god, give this girl a little break
I hope you no longer haste,
give the girl at least one friend..
anything to make her..
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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 9

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    Ah..this is really very powerful expression and you have stated it so wonderfully as well..love the emotive sccenario...thanks for the poetry...