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Stumbling Forwards

Eyelids heavy, head pounding
Pain in your temples,
Just beyond your reach

Mind confused, searching
Too much to drink
But not enough to care

Walking away from the music
Blasting so hard
The ground shakes with it

Tripping over your own two feet
Collapsing forwards
Hitting the pavement

Cold, hard, uncaring
But you lift yourself up
Stumbling forwards

Leaving behind the dancing
The blasting stereos
The escape from it all

Feet blistered,
Exhausted and lost,
Confused in the crowd

Stumbling forwards
Towards reality
Away from the music

Author notes

uhh sort've like the aftermath of getting drunk at a club... and using it as a way to escape reality for a while

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