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Change

Change
Unavoidable
Unbearable.

Change
Desirous
Deadly.

Change
Fresh
Frightening.

Change
Panacea
Peevish.

Change
Gain
Gone.

Change
AH! AH!
Alas!

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  • valefor gold member
    June 30

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    Another great example of less is more. It expressed a lot with few words. Something we all feel while we live our lives.

    Well done!


  • Ethereal One gold member
    June 30

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    excellent expression

    You express the many emotions we experience when change enters our lives. I almost feel as though you have been reading my mail, but then I remember we are all only human.

    Great write my friend.

    Jeannette

  • this shows both sides of coin...there is a real duality that exists within every thing...you capture this truth easily here...thanks for sharing. keep up the great work. peace an dlight, kp

  • It is true,
    Change is always there,
    The only thing it really affects,
    Is how much you care.

  • XxLuckyxX
    June 27

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    This is truly a remarkable write. So much in so few words. The truths stated here about change are raw and stated so plainly yet still make you sit back and think. The contradictions you point out here are so true. Change can be feared or desired, chased or ran from. Powerful write. Keep up the great work.

  • This is amazing, i like this a lot, great job, i really liked taking the time to read this, you did something great here

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