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Compulsive Liar

Hello?
Can You Tell The Truth?
Or Are You Unable?
Your Mind Is Unstable.

                          These Black Thoughts,
                          They Twist And Turn.
                          I Though You Could Change,
                          But I Have Learned.
                          No One Can Change On Their Own Accord,
                          I Tried To Help You,
                          My Attempts Were Ignored.
 
                                            People Like Honesty,
                                            But Thats Something You Can't Give,
                                            Its Happened Way To Often,
                                            And They Dont Forgive.

                                                                      I Keep Thinking,
                                                                      Maybe You Will Tire.
                                                                      But I Know You,
                                                                      What You Are.



                                                     

                                        Compulsive Liar.


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  • i love this poem
    especialy the first and last couple lines. You always write poems about really differently awesome things. I'd never read a poem about compulsive liars before this one.