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awake at night

To hide the pain
to kill the flesh
to feel again
my mind is fresh

and it scares me so
to lie awake in bed
my thoughts to know
just what haunts my head

i think and i think
no more than just a flash
again i shrink
perhaps, a tiny little rash?

but suddenly it grows
and talks of many things
ideas to stand and throw
to fly with no wings

and still i cannot sleep
the clock now strikes two
to walk with more than feet
the memories of you

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    June 27

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    oh wow!

    Now this is perfect

    Great rhyme as well.

    Each and every word had me locked onto what you had to say!

    Well done on a great write!