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Get your peace back

Your existence, your pride, is a wish fulfilled.
Your body your mind n soul, were nourished.
Your merit your intelligence, were nurtured.
Your wishes your dreams, were supported.

Your existence your pride, not your alone.
Your body mind n soul, are in deep debt.
Your merit your intelligence, are payable loan.
Your wishes n dreams fulfilled are committed.

Awake, from head to foot, you are indebted.
Your glory your fame, your wisdom, is at stake.
Your riches, your fortune, are being laughed at.
Your glitter your shine, are waning black.

Go fast and act, protect your soul, be wise.
Fulfill the commitments not kept, repay your debts.
Don't be a miser, don't hesitate, your heart cries.
Laugh with them; Get your peace back, long awaited.

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