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Color

: What's your color?

: Color!

: Yes, I mean it.

: Why ask? You can see it!

: Shut up. You know what I mean.

: What do you mean, Sir?

: Shut up. You know I don't mean black or white.

I mean what you are?

Blue? Green, Red? saffron or a tri?

: None, Sir.

: Shut up.

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*P a l a s K u m a r R a y

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    September 2

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    Sociopolitical colours??

    Social colours in politics???
    Am I missing something? Is it an American thing?

    I'm more than a little confused... probably easier just to assume it's because I'm a young English girl.
    Politics makes me blind, I don't have a clue about it in this country, let alone America, or India.

    I'm soory that I am unable to appreciate this the way it was intended...
    (Although, feel free to explain- I don';t mind learning!)


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    August 10
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    Your point is well taken - thanks for entering the contest.

    Moses