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Not My Thing

I just don’t have the urge anymore
Not to wake up
Not to move
I just want to sleep everything away
I can’t stand thinking
My body just seems to ache
I cannot be sure of what this may be
But eventually this has to end
I just wish it would be soon
I hate the knot that rests at the bottom of some internal well
Whatever it is, it needs to go away
Feelings are not my forte


TKittling

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  • Dog Tag
    June 27
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    i love this! your amazing, great job. i enjoyed reading this


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 27

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    this is sad

    you write so effortlessly i'm betting you could pen a piece about a rock and it be engrossing..your words pull at the reader..excellent, but sad write my friend..