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Air

In essence of air
surrounded by despair
designed by care
special to a stare
tiers at that
might splat!

Lingering scented oils
lifted fumes perfumed
turmoil selected perfection
In a moment of soil
born ravashing as the last
must pass


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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 2

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    oooh... love this little articulate tongue twister..
    A profound thought made fun... Well done and thank you
    for your entry and your patience in my contest.



    Love,
    Delila


  • Denerica silver member
    June 27
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    Interesting concept you got there for the pic, clever write. Blessings.