She wasn't too bright tonight
wearing a cloak of ashen cloud
like a shroud...
Was it that death
was slowly coming
to life that autumn,
or was it that she was sad
because Autumn
brought Winter
in tow.
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A contest entry
- September Moon by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended June 27, 8 entries
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the moods of the moon we put so much of ourselves, our feelings, there...wonderful... PK
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Now this is a tight, clever piece indeed.
Grand words hun.
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i love it, so Im glad you couldnt change it.... good luck D
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beautifully creative... x
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She feels the way I do about about autumn.
Well penned.
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So sorry i misread, there are more than 25 words in this poem. I went back to change it but couldn't. i like it too much. anyway i'll leave it in just so you can read it. hope you like it.
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