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I can find a reason

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California,
in the middle of a dry spell;

nevermind letters home to ma,
she's hopelessly opposed ...
 
this antiquated radio
plays frequented oldies,

 

singers posthumously mend
vibration to ear
in some degree
or another.

Squeaky old desk fans hum
they push humid air in the room,
noisy shuffles against pale walls

blow back on my sunburned face.

Why does Hell have to be so damned hot?


All I ever wanted
was for the reflections
at the bottom of the well

to come true

and

when I salivate
through muddled tangents,
I find only solace in actions,

familiar.


 

You were not made aware-

maybe that's a good thing for ...

I'd locate the key-that golden key
for its likeness, a brilliant door,
where secrets of the world scream inside.

Dont know what to do now that it's open,
reminds me be careful what I wish for.

It has become a giant monster
subservient to my innards and

control is just a meager means
to offer sanity.

 

 

~~~

 


 

 

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 2

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    Oh I so enjoyed this and I can certainly relate to your feelings portrayed. This poem is definately a product of a profound and brilliant mind. Well done here my favorite part was...



    "All I ever wanted
    was for the reflections
    at the bottom of the well

    to come true

    and

    when I salivate
    through muddled tangents,
    I find only solace in actions,

    familiar.".....


    Love
    Delila


    Thank you so much for entering my contest and your patience.


  • Truetome
    July 16

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    ♫ ♪ it's grand to keep on having something to wish for. is it not? if we had e'erything, would not life be less of a challenge? great thought here. love,


  • parenchma
    July 11

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    Awareness can be such a burden...
    It is so effen hot here, too. Nobody goes outside; we haven't had a job for a solid week. I've lost a weeks gross income. And I'm not taking the heat as good this year. Gettin old's a b bbb bblessing, I guess...


  • Desire gold member
    July 2

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    Aaaaaaaw Dangggg~

    You know this swells the eyes and after I inhaled the first stanza- I had to put my windshield wipers on~ almost took an eye out
    Gosh teach me how to write-
    my quill walked out on me~ dang nabbit...
    snaps fingers~ Love this and how You weave words-
    I may have to borrow some brain cells- mine walked into toooooo many walls~

    This is deep~ Yep! Yep!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Swan song gold member
    July 2

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    you are truly a deep thinker and an excellent poet
    i liked this so ta ta my dear I will be reading it again as soon as i am done writing my admiration for your lovely poem

  • be careful what I wish for,
    it just may land right square on my head....

    hmmm, you could always wish to be here in winter with us.
    Hold on, we could just swap places
    Juls


  • Amera gold member
    July 2

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    I love where you took this; you set a scene with sound, motion and imagery and then you impart the wisdom and the point of the poem. You truly have the heart of a poet.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • This is really good. I like the way you wrote it. Honestly, I think this deserves a gold medal. Keep up your amazing work, and best of luck!

    TwiztidMaggot

  • why does it have to be so hot? - is what i keep thinking at the moment inside a heat wave but it is better than being cold. abstract and time and approval (mother's) come to my mind here, and wishes wished for in another age. a good poem.

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