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Married at 14

Dear Lowercase prelude,
 
Such insanity i reside into youth, it's moments rare infrequent events of laughter as out childish hands would reach for one another and the prom's were i would dance with you and of course thy with me. It felt like summers eternal glow as if naught could destroy us and yet we grew apart. I thought us to be so inseparable, i loved you truly i did and i never saw you, felt you, treat another girl like you did me.

You would nay caress her on grind your hips and shred her a smile to hypnotise her but wave and laugh so sweetly always saying "no". And in the heat of war, where every journey to school would end with a friend being blown into pieces where you would grip any persons hand as the earth fell apart from under you and the sky seemed to hurtle at you with such a speed...

You gripped my hand. For the first time in 3 years we touched, and it was as we were being bombed, as the floor was stolen from under our feet and the air snatched from our lungs. As we lay there, slowly falling into the blackness i struggled to see you again.
"Maxx i love you" you groaned as if it was what you had always wanted to hear and i couldn't help smiling as you turned, your hands holding my face and replayed with such romantic final words: "Kelly will you marry me?" And even now i laugh when i said yes, we didn't need a priest nor any vicar and a church. We were 14 years old and you asked me, i said yes because i never thought...if you asked me today i would still say yes.

But you died right there and then, as i said "I do" you could never muster the response, don't feel bad but i'll never forget you. Just, when i see you in heaven or hell or where ever i go, just tell me you do. Please?

With love,
Kelly xxx
[True events of my life at 14]

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Dear Lowercase,
it's true my letter and though perhaps you didn't want to hear i felt i could leave you with my past because i feel i can just reside in you.

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  • fanaa
    August 25
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    im sorry to hear that...
    thank u for ur entry...

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 5

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    I liked this. It was really pretty and very sweet. I'm so sorry this happened to you. this was an amazing piece. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • black-phenoqu
    July 4

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    wow. was there really a maxx, and a war, and did maxx really die in the war?

    i only wish i could find such happiness, if only for a short time.
    they say it is better to love and lost, than to not have loved at all. not sure if i agree with that, there you go.

  • Xxpoison.kissesxX silver member
    June 26
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    wholly.. wowness...


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 26

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    Dear Kelly,

    Wow. How beautiful love can often be and how hurtful life can also be, taking love away from us. I am honored that you would share your story with me. This is a remarkable story of love and the human heart, in the midst of chaotic circumstances.

    Thanks again,

    Chris

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